Wednesday, February 25, 2015

Week 7 Storytelling: Sita's Innocence

Rama, covered in blood and sweat, slowly walked over to where his beloved Sita lie in wait. Rama had just defeated the mighty demon Ravana, all to rescue Sita away from his clutches. You would think that after such an epic battle, Rama would just want to hug Sita and ask her if she was okay, but no. Rama just walked up to Sita and looked her up and down, as if she was tainted by something. Sita looked back at Rama with a confused look on her face.

“What is wrong, my love?” she asked Rama in a worried voice.

Rama seemed to be acting very odd towards her and she did not like it one bit. She looked him in the eyes, searching for an answer. She could figure out nothing from his blank expression. Rama still just stood there, looking at her carefully as if he was observing a specimen in the lab.

“How can I be so sure that you and Ravana didn’t….,” Rama began to say but he couldn't even finish speaking.

Sita felt like a dagger had pierced her heart. Her insides were screaming in disbelief. Her heart shattered at the thought that Rama didn’t trust her anymore. Still, Sita kept her calm and replied confidently.

“I have not done anything that will jeopardize our love for each other. I was simply a hostage in a demon’s territory. A demon who was infatuated by my beauty. I only love you, Rama, and I would dare not to mess around with another man or let another man take advantage of me!” exclaimed Sita.

Rama still did not seem convinced. He paced back and forth, mulling over the situation in his head. He knew Sita loved him and that she would never do anything or let anything like that happen to her. But then again, Ravana was the type of demon to force himself upon others without a second thought. His stomach turned as an image flashed before his eyes. His knees started to feel weak so he sat down, disgusted with himself. Sita was not that type of woman. Still…he was not assured. At that moment, the fire god, Agni, appeared next to Sita.

“If you are innocent, my child, step into the flames. Nothing will happen to you if you tell the truth,” roared Agni.


Sita glanced over at Rama, immersed in his own inner battle with himself. She knew she had to convince him that nothing had happened. Without any hesitation, Sita walked up into the flames and was immediately engulfed in a fiery whirl of red and orange. She didn’t even seem fazed about walking into a roaring trial by fire. Rama snapped out of his thoughts and watched, his jaws clenched, hoping that Sita was right. As the flames died down, Sita was still standing where Agni had been, unharmed by the scorching fire. Rama ran up to Sita and embraced her, joyous at the fact that she was still pure and faithful to him.

Sita's trial by fire to prove her innocence; Web Source 

Author's Note: I thought this was an interesting part of the Ramayana, partly because I didn't expect Rama to question Sita's innocence. When reading this part in the book, I expected Rama to be happy to see Sita and embrace her right away. Obviously, that’s not what occurred. I thought it would be a good story to retell because I wanted to depict both character's thoughts and feelings to an extent. This also occurs immediately after the death of Ravana so it adds an extra element of intensity to the setting. Buck tells this story one way, while Narayan tells it another way. My way ended up being very different from either of them because I added so much of Rama and Sita's inner thoughts.

I didn’t really change the story much. I just added extra details to convey Rama’s and Sita’s thoughts and feelings of the situation at hand. I wish I could’ve thought of a better way to describe Agni. I just couldn’t find the right words to portray my image of him.

I chose the picture because it gave a visual representation of Sita's trial by fire. She seems so calm in the picture, as if she has nothing to worry about. Even if I wasn’t guilty, I would still be a tiny bit nervous of stepping into a fire. Her unwavering love and loyalty to Rama helped her brave the trial without a doubt of being burnt. She left the fire unscathed and regained Rama's trust.

Bibliography: Buck, William (1976). Ramayana: King Rama's Way. 

6 comments:

  1. Parth, this is a really good retelling of kind of a confusing part of the book. When I first read it in Narayan's version, I was really surprised! Rama went to all that trouble to rescue Sita, and he didn't even seem that excited to see her once it was all over. So I really like that you retold it with more insight into what the characters were thinking and feeling. You did a great job with it. You realistically explained how complicated their emotions were. I also like the picture you posted with the story.

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  2. Parth, I really enjoyed reading your take on this particular part in the story. It was very interesting yet disappointing that Rama would even question Sita's love to him!! Your details and point of view of this really was great, because it gave me an even better insight on what each character might have been thinking. Love your image! It really sets the whole mood of your story. Overall, great job!

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  3. Hi Parth! Before even reading your story I am excited to get started just from the title! Sita is my favorite character and I loved the readings that had to do with her proving her innocence to Rama after her abduction by Ravanna.

    You did a great job with detail! I could picture everything that was happening in your story. You did a wonderful job at conveying how hurt Sita was that Rama no longer trusted her. You also did a great job at conveying Rama’s thoughts and emotions at this time. I have only seen other stories mention Sita’s side of the story so it was interesting to see how the situation affected Rama as well.

    I love the picture you used, it goes with your story perfectly. I really enjoyed your story! You did a wonderful job and I am looking forward to reading more of your stories as the semester continues!

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  4. Hi Parth! This was an excellent rendition of the story! Like you, I found this part of the Ramayana to be very intriguing. Since Rama spent so much of the storyline in search for Sita, I thought it was odd that he would be so hesitant to accept her. Ravana was cursed to never touch a woman against her will, so he wouldn’t have been able to do anything without Sita’s permission. I like how you started the story with the moment after Ravana’s defeat. The post-battle weariness and tension is portrayed very well in the scene. When Rama saw Sita, you did a great job portraying Rama’s reluctance and distrust. I also like how you described how unfazed Sita was, and the picture you chose definitely adds to that. Sita’s purity test certainly evokes many different opinions about Rama and Sita, and I think you did an excellent job retelling the story in a way that shows both the characters’ thoughts and emotions. Great job!

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  5. Hello Parth,

    This is my second time visiting your storybook and I am going to review your third story this time, “Sita’s Innocence.” Before I do, if I may suggest, you should at a brief sentence describing each story in your portfolio index. That way the reader will be able to have a chance to understand the plot of the story. Other than that your portfolio page looks great and all the links work correctly. I like the Weather Underground Widget that you added to the page.

    Your story was great. This part is one of the most exciting in my opinion. No one expected Rama to act the way that he did after slaying Ravana and going over to Sita. You did a good job at building a Rapma’s and Sita’s feeling during this part of the story. I think that the picture you chose perfectly shows how Sita handled the trail of the fire!

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  6. Parth,

    I also found this portion of the Ramayana very interesting. I was pretty angry at how Rama acted towards Sita. Especially after how much emphasis was placed on saving Sita. I really disliked how Sita, who was already a victim, was victimized further when her faithfulness was questioned. Faithfulness isn’t even the correct word because if she had been raped by Ravana, it wouldn’t have even been close to her fault. Rama is always portrayed as morally righteous, but I had a feeling that if Sita had been taken advantage of he would have tossed her to the side like trash.

    Anyways, you did a good job of recreating this tale. I think you stuck to the storyline well and I can see how your piece differed with the added details/thoughts. I really liked your author’s note. The only suggestion I have is to summarize the original story a little more (although most of your audience has probably read the original).

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