Mankanaka was a very odd fellow who did some pretty
questionable things. One action of his that was very questionable was that he
had chosen to live in the forest alone, in hopes of finding his “inner peace”,
as if that was ever going to happen! He had also decided that he would never
eat anything except the greenest, freshest, most luscious looking grass. It had
been twelve years since Mankanaka had isolated himself in the forest and he had
yet to eat anything else.
The deer were getting highly fed up with Mankanaka because
he was basically either THEIR grass. How absurd was it that a human was eating
deer food?! And besides, they had been here before Mankanaka had even been
born. This was no place for silly little humans to be clowning around. So the
deer got together and decided they were going to do something about Mankanaka. They
had heard that if humans ate grass for long enough, their blood would turn into
grass juice. Mankanaka, of course, was oblivious to this rumor and the deer
figured that if he saw himself oozing out green grass juice instead of normal
red blood, he would stop either their grass. It seemed like a brilliant plan to
the deer at the time, but little did they know they were about to cause mayhem…
As night fell and Mankanaka fell asleep to the sound of
crickets chirping and the wind blowing the leaves on the towering trees, a deer
slowly crept up to Mankanaka to finally put this plan into action. It was all
or nothing now, although the deer had probably the easiest job you could think
of. All he had to do was bite Mankanaka hard enough to draw blood, or in this
case grass juice, and he was done! The deer slowly lowered his head down to
Mankanaka’s arm, looked around to see if the coast was clear, and then
proceeded chomped down on his arm. Green grass juice spurted out of Mankanaka’s
arm as the deer galloped off into the distance. Mankanaka woke up howling in
pain and looked at his arm, which was throbbing as if it had just been
amputated.
What he saw should have scared Mankanaka, but he was a strange
fellow of course. When he realized that his blood had become grass juice,
Mankanaka started grinning from ear to ear, as happy as can be! This was so
cool to him! Instead of bleeding red, he was now oozing out green and this made
him so excited that Mankanaka started to dance. He danced and danced so much
that the whole world started dancing with him. All of the dancing commotion was
creating problems in the ocean from the rumbling and stomping of everyone’s
feet. Large tsunamis and whirlpools were formed from the chaos and wreaked
havoc all across the world. The deer looked on in shock, appalled at what they
had done.
The gods could take this no longer so they sent a messenger to
Mankanaka telling him that the gods had requested that he stop dancing and
destroying the world. Mankanaka had been so excited and happy, that he had not
realized what a mess he had caused. He quit dancing and vowed to the gods that
he would never eat grass again and cause this sort of mayhem ever again. After
this incident, Mankanaka decided to go back home to his family and surprise
them. He was done with the forest life and was ready to live out his own
dreams!
Author’s Note: I
had a hard time deciding what I wanted to write about this week but I finally
ended up deciding to write about the story of Mankanaka. I found this section
to be pretty comical and entertaining and figured I could add my own twist to
it and make it more interesting. I found the whole concept of his blood turning
to grass juice to be pretty funny. Leave it to these old epics to have the
wackiest stuff you can think of!
I chose this image because it's how I pictured the forest that Mankanaka was in to be. It's so green and fertile, anyone would be tempted to eat the grass here. Okay, not really but I wanted the portrayal of this forest to pop out to the reader from the image selection and I think this picture does that pretty well.
Bibliography: Buck, William (1973). Mahabharata.
The dazzling green forest; Wikipedia |
Hey Parth,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your story. It flowed smoothly and was easy to read. I thought this story was comical and I found that very refreshing after such a long week. Blood turning into juice is very creative and something that I don’t think that I could have thought of. These epics definitely do have some different stories and elements to their readings. Overall, good job I enjoyed the story.
Hey Parth! You have such an amazing skill for color commentary (I think that’s what it’s called). Like when you said “as if that was ever going to happen,” I started cracking up laughing! I loved how the deer were out to get him! That was absolutely hilarious! You have such an amazing voice in your stories, especially with the little bits of comedy here and there. Excellent job!
ReplyDeleteHello again, Parth! I liked your story very much. it was told well and easy to comprehend. It was a nice little story to read after spring break. I tried to find something to give feedback on, but your story was flawless! There were no mistakes. The picture you chose was magnificent. It looks just like how I would picture the forest in the story.
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