Showing posts with label Week 13. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 13. Show all posts

Sunday, April 19, 2015

Famous Last Words: Week 13

As the semester is winding down, things are kind of in a resting state. It’s kind of like the calm before the storm (finals). I know this calm feeling isn't going to last very long though because finals are looming in the near future and I am not looking forward to that. At this point, I’m just ready to finish off the semester and enjoy my summer and I can’t enjoy my summer unless I do well on all my finals and finish the semester strong. Hopefully all goes well and smooth these next few weeks!

This class has definitely been an intriguing class. I’ve learned a lot more from reading these stories and other people’s blogs than I thought I would. As the semester went on and the class progressed, I found myself looking forward to reading other people’s blogs because some people write so well and their stories just jump out at you and come to life! I think my best writing for this week was my storytelling assignment. I was pretty happy with the outcome of that after I proofread it and submitted it. Another reason I like this class is because it helps me keep my writing skills polished, which is never a bad thing. Writing has always came easy to me, but practice always makes perfect, or at least near perfect!


I really liked that this week’s project commenting assignment was actually voting for our favorite projects. There were so many to choose from but I already had my favorites that I would choose to go back and comment on for the extra credit commenting assignments. Overall, I’ve had a great experience in this class and I’m glad I wait listed myself for a whole semester before actually taking this class. It was definitely worth the wait in my opinion!

The calm before the storm (final exams); Flickr

Thursday, April 16, 2015

Week 13 Storytelling: Bhishma's Sendoff

“How can I do this?” thought Arjuna to himself. “I regard Bhishma as a grandfather to me and I would never be able to live it down if I killed him!” he cried to Krishna.

“Fine,” said Krishna with a heavy voice. “I shall do it myself.”

Krishna retrieved his discus and prepared to end Bhishma’s life with one quick throw. It would be quick and painless. Arjuna yelled out and stopped Krishna from doing so. He did not want to be the reason Krishna broke his oath to not use a single weapon during the war.

“I will do it,” said Arjuna.

Krishna nodded his head and motioned to the direction of Bhishma. Arjuna faced towards Bhishma and slowly pulled out his bow and a handful of arrows. This was going to be Arjuna’s legacy. It was finally time to leave his mark and prove to the world that he was the best. He fought with a good heart and knew that this was the right decision. He closed his eyes and cleared his head. A feeling of calmness washed over Arjuna. It was now or never.

Arjuna let the arrows fly and one by one they each struck Bhishma, ripping through his body which caused a jolt of remorse and guilt through Arjuna’s conscience for each arrow. Bhishma was an old man, but he was an exceptionally great warrior. His battle skills had impressed everyone to the point that when Bhishma fell, the war ceased for the moment to give everyone an opportunity to pay their respects to this great man. Arjuna looked up as the heavens opened directly above them and flowers rained down onto the battlefield. This was the gods paying their respects to Bhishma, a token of appreciation for his bravery.

As Bhishma slowly slid off the mighty chariot, the arrows protruding from his body pierced the ground which made a makeshift bed. Arjuna had aimed the arrows perfectly to make a bed for Bhishma to lie on. The rest of the men on the field nodded in appreciation for what Arjuna had done. Whispers went through the men as they heard talk of how Bhishma could choose the exact moment of his death, time and place. This was true and Bhishma was not going to die until the winter solstice, the shortest day of the year. This was his personal choice, reasons unknown for why he chose that particular day.

“Water,” mumbled Bhishma.

Arjuna shot an arrow at the ground, which caused a fountain of water to shoot into Bhishma’s mouth. It is said that it was Ganga herself who supplied the water to her son. Krishna stepped down from his chariot and walked over to where Bhishma lay. He could see that Bhishma was in pain and was struggling to keep himself calm and relaxed. Krishna bestowed upon him a deep, calming, peaceful sleep that freed Bhishma of the pain.  This was the perfect way to end Bhishma’s long, valiant stand against the Pandava army. He knew the Pandavas were the better people in the end to come out of the war victorious, but he also knew that he was the biggest obstacle in their path to winning the war. He fought faithfully for the Kaurava army, even though he knew what he was fighting against, and was arguably the best commander of the army. He would be a legend after he passed on and that’s what kept him calm.


It’s funny how this moment had brought the two sides to a peaceful halt, as if they had finally gotten along. This was not going to last long, as the impending war that was soon to return loomed in the near future like a dark cloud hanging low in the sky.

Author’s Note: I chose to write about this part of the story because it’s such an important moment in the Mahabharata. Bhishma is a well-respected character and his death was a big deal. Arjuna is also my favorite character in out of all the Indian Epics characters. There were probably so many feelings involved with all the characters in this moment that I couldn’t explain them all. I tried as best I could in this story because I thought it would be an interesting idea to imagine. I think Arjuna was affected the most by this event.

I didn't really change much from the original version. I basically just told the story from Arjuna's point of view. In this section, Krishna proceeds to kill Bhishma but Arjuna stops him because Krishna made a vow not to use any weapons. When Bhishma is finally killed by Arjuna, the whole world celebrates his successful and respected life.

I chose this image because it shows Bhishma lying on his bed of arrows while all the other men sat around him paying their respects. It was the only time during the war that both sides were united together and I thought that was a memorable part of the Mahabharata. 

Bibliography: Buck, William (1973). Mahabharata.

Everyone paying their respects to Bhishma; Wikimedia Commons

Tuesday, April 14, 2015

Week 13 Reading Diary B: Bhishma's Grand Death

In this section of the reading the war officially begins between the Kauravas and the Pandavas. Bhishma leads Duryodhana’s army while Dhristadumnya leads the Pandava army. The part that really stood out to me was how Bhishma’s downfall took place. From the very beginning, Arjuna is hesitant to fight Bhishma because he regards him as a grandfather. Although Bhishma was an old man, he was still very powerful and awed everyone on the battlefield. To defeat Bhishma, Arjuna seeks the help of Sikhandin to take down Bhishma. Bhishma is shot and wounded with so many arrows that when he falls down out of his chariot, his body doesn’t even touch the ground. As soon as Bhishma falls, all the fighting and bloodshed stops immediately and flowers sprinkle down upon everyone from heaven. A pillow is made for Bhishma’s head and he is given water to drink. The cool thing is that Bhishma has the power to choose the exact time and place of his death so he decided to lie on his bed of arrows until the shortest day of the year arrives. To relieve Bhishma of the terrible pain he must be feeling, Krishna puts him in a deep sleep.




I thought this scene was so graceful and intense at the same time. The respect Bhishma draws from everyone is mind blowing. I don’t think anyone has had a death like this in any of the epics I have read so far in this class. It is definitely one of my favorite scenes from the Mahabharata. 

Bhishma on his bed of arrows; Wikipedia

Monday, April 13, 2015

Week 13 Reading Diary A: The War is Brewing

During a part of their exile, the Pandavas chase a deer deep into the depths of a forest. Once in the forest, Yudhishthira sends his brothers, one after the other, to get water for them at the lake. For some reason, none of them return and Yudhishthira grows to become very worried. When he arrives at the lake, he finds the dead bodies of his brothers. An unknown voice speaks to him and tells him that he must answer all of the questions if he wants his brothers to return alive. Yudhishthira answers all the questions and then learns that this is a test given to him by his father Dharma who is a divine being. Yama revives the dead Pandava brothers.

I found this scene to be very interesting because it seems super intense. I wonder what was going through Yudhishthira’s mind when he realized that his brothers had died. If it were me, I would feel so bad because it would've been my fault that they died. Yudhishthira was the one who sent his own brothers to fetch the water instead of going himself.


I’m also glad that Arjuna decides to choose having Krishna on his side during the battle over Krishna’s humongous army. Duryodhana is ecstatic when he learns that he will be getting Krishna’s army because it is the best army in the world. I would've made the same decision if I were in Arjuna’s position because Krishna is such a strong character. He’d easily win the war!

Arjuna meets Krishna; Wikipedia